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RebreatherDave · 9th April 2006, 02:54

John,

For starters, thanks for the loop hose covers I bought several months ago from you......they work great.....

As to the site, where do I begin....

The flash intro loads quite quick for me, but many of the flash text graphics are partially off the page sides......the music is techno-annoying.....try something soothing like Enya or remove the flash altogether better yet.

The loops covers page......the text alignment is not centered within the blue backdrop graphic, and the title is not aligned to the Inspo photo...also do away with the underlinging, it serves no purpose other than to over-busy the text.

There is tiny horizontal bars to the right of the Inspo photo that don't add stylistically.....I would change the font to something other than Times, and try to not use too many different fonts. Helvetica and Verdana are good choices.

"Please be aware covers can take 20 days..." is almost completely unreadable as the font is yellow. Get rid of different font colors, makes it look too busy.

Rather then having a order form template for each rebreather hose cover, which makes the page scroll really far down, why not just use one template, and have the client type on their rebreather model? Makes things way easier, accomplishes the same thing and shortens up the page.

Where you say you built your own rebreather, you can probably delete the hyphen between re and breather.

I have to run for dinner, I will look at all the other pages for you and render my useless opinions!

9th April 2006, 02:54	#8 (permalink)
RebreatherDave Maximum **** Current Rebreather/s: Inspiration Classic Other Rebreather/s:** Join Date: May 2005 Location: L.A., where the debris meets the sea Posts: 226	Re: What Do You Lot Think? John, For starters, thanks for the loop hose covers I bought several months ago from you......they work great..... As to the site, where do I begin.... The flash intro loads quite quick for me, but many of the flash text graphics are partially off the page sides......the music is techno-annoying.....try something soothing like Enya or remove the flash altogether better yet. The loops covers page......the text alignment is not centered within the blue backdrop graphic, and the title is not aligned to the Inspo photo...also do away with the underlinging, it serves no purpose other than to over-busy the text. There is tiny horizontal bars to the right of the Inspo photo that don't add stylistically.....I would change the font to something other than Times, and try to not use too many different fonts. Helvetica and Verdana are good choices. "Please be aware covers can take 20 days..." is almost completely unreadable as the font is yellow. Get rid of different font colors, makes it look too busy. Rather then having a order form template for each rebreather hose cover, which makes the page scroll really far down, why not just use one template, and have the client type on their rebreather model? Makes things way easier, accomplishes the same thing and shortens up the page. Where you say you built your own rebreather, you can probably delete the hyphen between re and breather. I have to run for dinner, I will look at all the other pages for you and render my useless opinions!
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